hiya~ last journal before i disappear again~

lolz....to anyone who cares...


anywayz.....during school, my friend and I will be working on a story and i've been left incharge of the 'wordy' stuff..... anyways

itz called 'Been together'

i've worked out a 'lame' story line for it, you know the backbone sort a stuff! but i think it'll be pretty good, so long as we get it finished by the end of this year!!! cause she's one grade ahead of me and she'll be finishing school this year...any whoz...

the opening goes a bit like this... tell me if there's anything to improve kay????


"In an Age of devastation, was once written a tale, of a princess and a peculiar promise...a crown was shattered, the princess stolen and all but the words of a forgotten face destroyed..."

then it open up to a scene in the blazed city of Persepolis, a boy and girl are escaping the raiders, when suddenly... the girl trips and in an effort to get to her feet, she steps on a trap that captures her in a cage...distressed, she tells the biy to run away..

" you should go! HURRY!"

boy: "no I won't leave, friends don't bail out on each other!"

girl: "no! you have to leave..."

boy: "I'll stay here and protect you!"

girl: "NO, Go...they'll only imprison me, but they'll kill you!"

as the raiders are about to approach the boy vanishes and the story fades to an older face of the boy, as though he wakes from a dream....saying.... 'though time and space divide us, i will never leave your side..'

a new charcter, Zero, appears....

we've got the rest of the story but it's really long...it's fantasy that is somewhat related to ancient persia, in the rule on Darius....

(not that anyone would, but please don't copy..this is my work entirely! (c) SABA)